_1.他的英语写得不错,,但不擅长英语口语。
_误：his written english is good, but not good at spoken english.
_正：his written english is good, but his spoken english is not good.
_正：he is good at written english, but not good at spoken english.
_析：误句中 but 后的句子缺适当的主语，因为 good at spoken english 的主语应是“他”，而不是 his written english。
_2.英语很有趣，我的确很喜欢。
_误：english is very interesting, and i really like very much.
_正：english is very interesting, and i really like it very much.
_析：like 是及物动词，其后通常应有宾语。
_3.别怕，我们会帮你的。
_误：don’t afraid; we’ll * you.
_正：don’t be afraid; we’ll * you.
_析：误句谓语不完整，因为 afraid 是形容词，不是动词，不能单独作谓语，必须和连系动词一起构成谓语。当然，若说成 don’t fear，则完全可以。
_4.住在我隔壁的李明是个医生。
_误：li ming, lives next to me, is a doctor.
_正：li ming, who lives next to me, is a doctor.
_正：li ming, living next to me, is a doctor.
_析：误句中定语成分不完整。定语从句是一个完整的句子，当先行词指人且关系代词在从句中作主语时要用that或who。也可用现在分词短语作后置定语。
_5.你介意我问你一个问题吗?
_误：do you mind i ask you a question?
_正：do you mind if i ask you a question?
_正：do you mind my asking you a question?
_析：误句中的主句和从句之间缺少连接词。也可以用动名词短语作mind的宾语。
_6.他
考试
及格了使*妈很高兴。_误：he passed the exam made his mother very happy.
_正：that he passed the exam made his mother very happy.
_正：he passed the exam, which made his mother very happy.
_析：误句中的主语应该是由主语从句来承担的。that引导主语从句，不做成分，无实际意义，但不能省略。也可以用非限定性定语从句。
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