to guitar club:
i want to be a member of guitar club because i enjoy playing the guitar very much.
the reason why i like playing the guitar is that it can * me to relax myself and makes my life colorful and meaningful. guitar gives me so much joy that i can’t live without it.
i think if i join guitar club, i would learn * knowledge, i beli* after learning these,i can prove my skills and the a*lity in playing guitar will climb to a greater height.
if you agree me to join you is just like putting a cherry on the cake. so let me join you and you will gain a huge precious resource.
yiting xu
2016.7.27
作者:徐颐珽
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dear sir/madam，
i'm glad that you can spare your time to read my self recommendation letter. my name is xu yiting. i really want to be a member of guitar club because i enjoy playing the guitar very much.
the reason why i like playing the guitar is that it can * me to relax myself and makes my life colorful and meaningful. guitar gives me so much joy that i can’t live without it.
i think if i join the guitar club, i would learn * knowledge. i beli* that i can prove my skills and the a*lity in playing guitar will get to a new stage after practising in the the club.
if you let me join you, it is just like putting a cherry on the cake. so please give me a chance and you will gain a huge precious resource.
best regards
yiting xu
初一:徐颐珽
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