i'm a chilnese girl. but l have an english girl friend.she is a very good girl,and she has a *g family. tow brot-hers and tow sisters. tow brothers are john and jim,tow sisters are alice and kate.she is miya,and she has a mat-her and a father.
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i'm a chinese girl. and l have an english girl friend who is called miya. she is a very good girl and she has got a really *g family. there are s*n people in her family. her father, mother, two brothers-john and jim, and two sisters-alice and kate.
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