there are many people in our lives.some are our friends.they ofen * for us.for example,first,with the * of them we make progress in our study.second,they ofen bring many funny for us.they also take away many bad things.and so on.so they play a very important part in our lives.i also have many friends.we ofen * and encourage each other *ryday.so,i think we should choose some frends who can * you and get along well with.
修改后：
*ryone needs friends. they often * us a lot. firstly, with the * of them we can make progress in our study. secondly, they often bring us lots of laughters. and they can share our sorrow, too. they play a very important role in our lives. i have many friends. we ofen * and encourage each other. so, i think we should make * friends and get along well with them.
修改老师：crystal老师
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