spring will coming soon,and i am so happy to see it again. i love spring because of its beautiful scenery,i can take my ease to play.i can fly the kite with my parents and friends.in addition ,i like doing some sports，so i can go hiking with my friends and see the nature beauty.i can also have a picnic with them. when the spring comes,i will open my arms to meet the spring arrival.i miss you very much,so could you give me a hug?
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spring is coming soon, and i am happy to see it again.
i love spring because of its beautiful scenery. i can play outside. i can fly the kite with my parents and friends. in addition, in spring i can go hiking with my friends and see the
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