_①强调句
_〔原文〕i met him in the street yesterday.
_〔修正〕it was in the street that i met him yesterday.
_it was yesterday that i met him in the street.
_②由with或without引导的短语。如:
_he sat in a chair with a news* in the hand.
_③分词短语。如:
_sati*ied with the result，he decided to go on with a new experiment.
_④倒装句。如:
_only in this way can we achi* our goal.
_n*r before have i seen such a wonderful film.
_not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent person.
_⑤省略句。如:
_if so，victory will be ours.
_you can make some changes wher*r necessary.
_3.通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。
_〔原文〕he stopped us half an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.
_〔修正〕he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
_〔原文〕we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.
_some told stories. some played chess.
_〔修正〕after a short rest， we had great fun singing and dancing， telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同长度的句子，要结合使用，不能只用短句或只用长句。
_4.学会使用过渡词。如:
_①递进: then(*)， besides(还有)， further*(而且)， *over(此外)等。
_②转折: how*r(然而)， but(但是)， on the contrary (相反)， after all(毕竟)等。
_③总结: finally(*后)， at last(*后)， in brief(总之)， in conclusion(*后)等。
_④强调: indeed(确实)， certainly(一定)， surely(确定)， above all(尤其)等。
_⑤对比: in the same way(同样地)， just as(正如)， on the one hand…on the other hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
_相似的比较： similarly, in the same manner 相反的比较： on the other hand, conversely, whereas, while, instead, n*rtheless, in contrast, on the contrary, compared with …,
_5.注意使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。如:
_〔原文〕a new railway is being built in my hometown.
_〔修正〕a new railway is under construction in my hometown.
_6.避免重复使用某一单词或短语。如:
_〔原文〕i like reading while my brother likes watching television.
_〔修正〕i like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
_i like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
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