_一、写作决窍
_总体把握，要点齐全;人称时态，逻辑清楚;
_*汇，动词第一;组词成句，结构完整;
_组句成文，连词增色;此路不通，绕道迂回;
_字迹工整，留好印象;从句适量，高分有望。
_二、写作步骤
_1.认真审题。审题包括要点、格式、词数以及此篇文章要传递给读者什么样的*，告诫读者什么(即写作目的)。
_2.确定文体和时态。确定文体后，根据不同文体的特点和要求进行组织材料;同时确定出该篇文章的总时态与时态的变化。
_3.写完要点，但不随意发挥。
_4.先*稿，后抄写。
_三、
作文
案例_[2004年全国中学生英语能力竞赛初赛初三组] (14分)
_choose one of your hob*es and write an article for the school magazine about it. tell the magazine readers.
_·what exactly your hobby is;
_·when and how you became interested in this hobby;
_·why you enjoy your hobby;
_·about your hopes and plans for the future.
_写作要求：
_1.根据所提供的内容，适当拓展想象空间，灵活地将提供的*体现在文章中。
_2.条理清楚，语句通顺，书写清晰、规范。
_3.词数60-80.
_[学生解答a]
_my hobby is read books①.when i was s*n years old.i became interested in reading books.i like needing books because there are a lot of useful things in books.i can learn a lot of knowledge from books. books also② can teach me how to be a good person.books *n can solve many problems for me.i will read * good books to improve myself.
_①改为reading books，动词作表语时应该用动名词。
_②also的位置应放在can之后。
_[点评]：档次9-11分。
_①要点不全，漏掉*后一个要点。
_②句子基本无误，能正确传递*给读者但文章不流畅，句子与句子之间过渡不自然，给读者感觉在回答上述问题。
_③有少量错误。
_[学生解答b]
_my hobby is reading.reading books is very enjoyable.when i was young ,my mother used to tell me a story before.i went to bed *ry night.the stories were so interesting that i always felt they weren’t enough.so i began to read books by myself.little by little i became interested in reading.i can learn much knowledge and many interesting things all over the world.when i read books,i can enjoy the beautiful sentences.at the same time i can improvemy writing.i want to be a writer in the future,so i must study hard and read * books so that my dream can come true.
_①开门见山、点题。
_②真情流露，理由充分。
_③文中带圈的连词使用得恰当，使文章过渡自然、
_④巧妙使用句型以表决心。
_[点评]：档次13-14分。
_①清楚表达写作目的，要点齐全。
_②语言表达灵活多样，字里行间流露出真情实感，文章有感染力。
_③恰当使用连词和从句，语言流畅，且无错误，是一篇高质量的作文。
_[高分突破]
_①文体：记叙文。
_②要点：what → when →how → why → hope and plan for the future.
_③时态：一般现在时，一般过去时，一般将来时的自然变化。
_内容具有开放性，但它也是“控制性”的写作试题，因此不能随意发挥，要善于抓*，写完要点。选用这两篇学生真实习作，一是因为他们选材相同，二是因为他们都是英语成绩优秀的同学。同学b灵活使用连词so…that,so,little by little,when,so that等，恰到好处地使用新句型和短语used to,became interested in,come true……等，使内容丰富，读起来优美流畅。其实这些表达同学a也会，只是缺乏技术加工。通过这两篇作文点评，同学们便能悟出其中的奥妙。
_四、培养途径
_1.根据老师布置的写作内容，独立完成一篇写作。
_2.与同伴合作，交流自己的写作，通过交流找出各自作文中写得好的地方和优美的句子，合作创造一篇新的文章，供大家欣赏。
_3.找老师点评，请求老师指点，尤其是怎样润色。
_4.自己纠错，写下反思。
_五、备考演练
_a
缙云山是重庆*的游览胜地，每天有大量的游客。请你根据下面提供的*写一篇报道，说明现在的游客在环境保护方面的变化。_写作要求：
_1.词数在100左右。
_2.条理清楚，语句通顺。
_3.开头已写好，但不计入总词数。
_jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest …
_b
_阅读电视广告词：“if we don’t save water,the last * of water will be a tear-*.”根据提示，写一篇60-80词的短文。
_提示：
_1.生活离不开水。
_2.可饮用水在减少。
_3.水污染严重。
_4.应保护水源，再利用水。
_思路点拨与参考答案
_a. [思路点拨]：
_①文体：记叙文。
_②时态：一般过去时态，一般现在时态。采用正反对*写作手法，增加感染力。
_③写作目的：告诉读者保护环境的重要性。
_jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest.*ry day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting theenvironment.they threw their rub*sh,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste * on the ground.sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed *rds. some *n made fires in the woods to cook food.how *erous it was.luckily,great changes have taken place here.tourists are used to putting their rub*sh into dust*ns,and they are doing their best to protect the *rds and plants as well.they bring their own meals instead of cooking to pr*ntstarting a forest fire in the mountains.all these changes make us very happy. __