my seasons
we have four seasons in a year. i can do many interesting things in each season. in spring, the weather is cool and wind, i can fly kites when its wind. and i can go hiking with my family when its sunny and cool. i like hiking. summer is hot in the north of china, but its not long time. i often go swimming. it can make me healthy and strong. i can also wear my beautiful dresses. fall is a season with harvest. and i can eat delicious fruits in this season. i can watch the leaves fall. winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. when it snows, *rything is white. we can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. and winter is my favourite season, because of the spring festival. i love seasons. i love the nature.
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写法：这篇短文是描述我的四季，在写法上，是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的，先讲明每个季节的特征，之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受，*后阐述自己*喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容，之后再去讲其他几个季节，还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色，如：秋天的田地里一片金黄，农民在收割等等，这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。
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