i like spring best.because there are beautiful flowers *rwhere.it's pretty. i can look flowers.i often play in the spring.sometimes i can play basketball. i like summer best.because i can go swimming.it's hot.i often go swimming with my family. i like eat ice cream in summer. i like autumn best. beacuse i can pick apple, but i can't swim.i often go on a picnic with my family.sometimes i watch tv on home. i like winter best.because i can play in the snow.winter is white and pretty.my mamand sister also like winter.i often play in the snow in winter.sometimes i go shopping with my family.
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i like spring. because in spring, there are beautiful flowers *rwhere. i can see flowers. i can go out to play in spring. sometimes i play basketball. i like summer. because i can go swimming. it's hot in summer, so i often go swimming with my family. and i like eating ice cream too. i like autumn. beacuse i can pick apples. i often go for a picnic with my family. sometimes i watch tv at home. i like winter. because i can make a snowman and have a snowball fight with my friends.
修改老师：crystal 老师
五年级:袁泉
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