spring returns to the good earth., the recovery of all things, spring quietly...
ln the four seasons, but you are the most beautiful, your arrival, the flowers show a smile; your arrival, the grass for you swing; your arrival, the butterfly for you to dance; your arrival, the *rds sing for you... you are my favorite season, since you are here, i want to give you a deep hug.
i want to close to you, and small partners in the fields go fly a kite, catch butterflies, catching cricket, tired, sleep lying on the grass, was born in the countryside, i, are * likely to be close to you, are * likely to embrace you.
spring, i want to give you a deep hug! the city inside the child, your feelings will be deeper? i like your spring, thank you for giving me a happy childhood.
修改后：
spring is coming quietly. it makes *rything come back to life.
spring is the most beautiful seasons. in spring, the flowers are smiling happily. the grass is dancing beautifully. and the *rds are flying and singing in the woods.
spring is my favorite season. in spring, i like flying a kite, chasing butterflies and lying on the grass when i feel tired.
i want to give spring a *g and warm hug! i like spring, thank you for giving me such a happy time.
修改老师：crystal 老师
六年级:吴紫菲
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