dream
used to be my fantasyand nowis my goalit may not be greatbut it's my goal in life.no dreamwhere to targetdreamis not a bob* dollit's my hope.no dreamwhere hopedreamis no longer a fiction idealhas tran*ormed into the power of my lifeno dreamhow to power
修改后：
dream
used to be my fantasy
but now
is what i want to be
it may not be great
but it's my goal as sure as fate
no dreams
what to target
dream
is not a bar*e doll
it's what i want to do at all
no dreams
where the hope is
dream
is no longer a fiction ideal
has been tran*ormed into the power of my life
no dreams
how to get strength
修改老师：
andy老师
修改意见：
英文的诗歌体裁，需要押韵，言简，但神需在！和中文诗歌不同，建议多阅读一些英文诗歌，*再进行创作~
初一:思灵
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