there is a person she silently pay no return，than person is the mother。the life of me、raising me、bring me up 、give me a home ，let me be free from care。 but l always do not understand ，think this is as unalterable principles， but l was wrong。i want to say to her：l love you，can say not to export。 when l need *，i always think of her first，and she will do her best to * me。when l am happy ，she will be * happy than me ，when l am sad，she will accompany me。 i sincerely say to you ，thank you 。
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my mother is a person who silently pays no return to take care of me. she gave me life and a home. she tries her best to raise me up and always put me at the first place. but sometimes i can't understand her. i think i can do lots of things by myself. *n i said something not good to her. i deeply regret. i want to tell her that i love her. when i need *, she will be there and do her best to * me. when i am happy, she will be h*r than me. when i am sad, she will accompany me. i want to say, "mum, thank you and i love you!"
批改老师：crystal老师
初二:左兴汶
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