maybe time to sleep,i should put my pen down,but i won't. i think it is good time to think.think about *rythiing---the thing what has happenedand the thing what will happen.always find truth of *rything out,then you will know this world. i'm always looking for something and learning some things.i've already felt time is real treasure,the b-est treasure in the world what thing *ryone has. it's time to sleep,i shouldn't keep writing now,but i will listen to music after this.
修改后：
maybe it's time to go to bed, i should put my pen down, but i won't.
i think it is good time to think.think about *rythiing---the thing that has happened and the thing that will happen. if you can always find out the truth of *rything, then you will know this world better. i always look for something and learn some things. and i've already felt time is real treasure, the best treasure in the world to *ryone.
it's time to go to bed, i shouldn't waste the treasure in my life.
修改老师：
andy老师
初三:黄越
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