_英语
作文
如何才能得高分呢?以下几种手段是增加句子复杂性的常见方法,也是得高分的“亮点”。_1. 改变句子的开头方式,不是一味地都是主语开头,接着是谓语、宾语,*后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首,或用分词作状语等。试比较:
_(原文) my brother and i went to the cinema by *cycle the other day.
_(修正) the other day my brother and i went to the cinema by *cycle.
_(原文) the young man couldn’t * crying when he heard the bad news.
_(修正) hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t * crying.
_2. 在整篇文章中,避免只使用一两个句式,要灵活运用诸如强调句、主从复合句、分词短语、倒装句、省略句等。例如:
_(1)强调句
_(原文) the dog has saved my little sister bravely.
_(修正) it is the dog that has saved my little sister bravely.
_(2)主从复合句
_(原文) we had to stand there to catch the offender.
_(修正) what we had to do was to stand there, trying to catch the offender.
_(3)分词短语、由with或without引导的短语
_(原文) the driver escaped and didn’t stop, he left the old man lying on the road.
_(修正) the driver escaped without stopping, leaving the old man lying on the road.
_(4)倒装句
_(原文) i went to bed at 11:30.
_(修正) not until 11:30 did i go to bed.
_(5)省略句
_(原文) while you are crossing the street, you should be careful.
_(修正) while crossing the street, you should be careful.
_3. 通过分句和合句,增强句子的连贯性和表现力。例如:
_(原文) he stopped us an hour ago. he made us catch the next offender.
_(修正) he stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender.
_(原文) we had a short rest. then we began to play happily. we sang and danced.
_(修正) after a short rest, we had great fun singing and dancing.
_4. 注意连接词与句子的运用。
_以2001年高考作文为例,在信的开头,可加上“you want to know something about what is going on in schools in china?”这句话起承上启下的作用,使文章过渡自然;再如,用“what was worse?”引出减负前,晚上还要做作业,就寝时间11:30等要点。又如,“now i have * free time...” 可引出减负后的情况。另外,在信的结尾,可用“how about you? i’m looking forward to hearing from you.”来自然地结束这封信。
_5. 使用过渡词语。
_写好了每个句子,并不一定就是一篇好文章,因为作为一篇文章,还必须行文连贯。那么,如何使文章行文连贯呢?这就要求我们在组成篇章时,要用好过渡性词语,过渡性词语就像是我们组装机械时使用的润滑剂一样,起着润滑的作用。常用的过渡词语主要有:
_并列递进:and, also, as well as, besides, what’s *, further*, *over, etc.
_转折:but, yet, how*r, although, n*rtheless, in spite of, after all, etc.
_因果:because, as, for, since, for this reason, because of, so, therefore, thus, as a result, etc.
_对比:or, otherwise, like, unlike, on the contrary, while, on the other hand, instead of, etc.
_总结:in all, in brief, on the whole, in short, in general, in one word, etc.
_总之,要使文章的层次高,可读性强,考生应增加些较高级的词汇与复杂的结构,并运用恰当的连接词和复合句,只有这样,才能在
考试
中取得理想的成绩。___