_一、首段
_第一段四个句子,第一句宏观描述图画,并谈图画看似可笑但发人深思.第二句写出图画*强烈的视觉效果,第三句是主题句,谈用二十个单词的爆发力句型谈该现象对个人的发展和进步有*性,并引发思考,第四句是用贬义词批判这个现象是强烈的指责。
_1、as is vividly depicted in the picture, which seems to be humorous and ridiculous but thought-provoking on second thoughts.
_2、the most striking feature that impresses me deeply is that unbelievably,
_3、recent few years has witnessed a phenomenon of 主题 which seems to be disastrous to inspanidual survival and prosperity.
_4、this phenomenon of 主题 should be condemned s*rely or made illegal.
_二、中间段落
_中间段落从两方面论证问题的危害，并举例论证，*危害的趋势
_第二段七个句子,首先第一句从宏观上谈这种现象的总的有两到三个点危害或者原因,第二句谈这个现象的第一个危 害,用 “not only, but also”的五星级句子,通常是谈对个人身心健康的危害性, 第三个句子谈第二个危害,通常是用一个豪华级的比较级的句子,让老师耳目一新,通常是谈这个现象对*的危害.第四个句子谈对家庭或学校的危害.第五个句 子谈一个代替 “for example”的十五个单词的好句子,意思是说没有更好的例子来证明正如下文.第六个句子是例子群体的出现,谈根据一项调查表明,80%以上的人只要从 事经历过这个消极的现象一定会对个人在精神和生活上有危害.*后一句话是*趋势的二十五个单词的钻石级的句子,谈以下*趋势,表明这种现象再这样下 去,就会导致恶劣的结果出现,甚至是毁灭性的后果。
_1、to account for the above-mentioned phenomenon, s*ral serious effects have been put forward.
_2、to begin with,主题 not only results does harm to our physical and mental health but also results in a frustrating and humiliating life.
_3、in addition, nothing is * harmful than主题 to contradict with a harmonious society.
_4、last but not the least, no issue is as harmful as 主题 to increase family burdens, which is a threatening situation we are unwilling to see.
_5、no better illustration of this idea can be thought than the example mentioned below .
_6、according to a survey made by china daily, 63.93% of young people who have *r experienced主题will live a dull life or *n feel loss of hope about the future.
_7、if we cannot take useful means, we may not control this trend, and some undesirable results may come out unexpectedly, we will see the gloomy future of something.
_三、结尾段落
_*后一段要强调解决问题，谈的两点建议通常是提高人们的意识，加强执法
_第三段六个句子, 第一个句子是下个结论,谈解决问题的必要性.第二个句子是第一个建议谈的是加强立法惩治这个现象,第三个句子谈提高人们的觉悟关于着这个现象能提高人们对 这个现象的觉悟.第四个句子谈个谚语,谈一下实践我的建议的重要性.五个句子谈解决的任重道远.第六个句子是解决问题之后的美好的未来。
_1、from what have been discussed above, it is therefore, necessary that some effective measures are taken to pr*nt主题.
_2、on the one hand, we should be sensible to strengthen the enforcement of the laws to protect something.
_3、on the other hand, it is demanding for us to keep people aware of the importance of saving somebody out of the evil hands of destruction.
_4、how*r, it is easier said than done.
_5、although the fight against it is long-standing and tremendous one,our efforts will *ntually pay off.
_6、only when you attention to it can you see a colorful and harmonious future better sooner or later.
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