there was once a little girl named jerry that lived with her mother in a small cottage in the forest, they were very poor, and could only afford to eat bread. “oh no!” cried jerry’s mother one noon, “we ran out of bread, and it is almost time for supper!” “do we have any eggs left?” asked jerry, “no, none;” said her mother very worried.
“don’t worry mother,” said jerry suddenly, “i shall go and get some in the *.” then she ran off through the forest to the * with her basket. along the way, she was quite tired, and so rested upon some *g rocks. it gradually became late and jerry decided to go and buy the bread, but suddenly a wolf cried out behind her; “please, please * me!” cried the wolf, “i have a problem that nobody wants to *!” then he held out his paw to jerry, there was a thorn stuck to his paw. “is this a trick?” asked jerry, “because wolves like to eat people.”
“oh no,” answered the wolf, “we do not eat people now, we only want to eat some bread with mustard on top;” then he cried again. jerry quickly knelt down and removed the thorn from the wolf’s paw; “oh thank you! thank you!” shouted the wolf joyfully, “i shall n*r forget your kindness!” then the wolf returned to his home. jerry walked to the * to buy healthy fresh bread, and then she ran off home with a full basket of it.
on the way, she was still tired; and so she stayed at the same place and the same time. as she was about to go, some greedy wolves blocked her way; they had water in their mouths and said, “give us the bread!” said a wolf, “where are the mustard?” asked a second wolf, “just give it to us!” shouted the third wolf. jerry had no choice, as she was about to give the fresh bread away to the wolf, the wolf that she had saved before rushed out and said, “leave her alone!” he growled, “that girl saved me before, and so leave her alone!” he shouted again.
the other wolves had no choice but to obey, they walked away. jerry thanked her new friend the wolf, and the wolf said that he was supposed to do that in return. and so to show jerry’s respect for him, she gave him half the bread, and returned home immediately to tell her mother about it.
they had some bread that *ning, and jerry’s mother including jerry herself all became good friends with the wolf; the wolf also had plenty of bread, and moved his home close to jerry.
the moral of this story was, if you * others and they will * you, you * them again then friends you’ll become. it will be a peaceful life if friendship is all around us; and that would be great for an important lesson.
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there was once a little girl named jerry that lived with her mother in a small cottage in the forest. they were very poor, and could only afford to eat bread. “oh no!” cried jerry’s mother one afternoon, “we ran out of bread, and it is almost time for supper!” “do we have any eggs left?” asked jerry, “no, none;” said her mother very worried.
“don’t worry mother,” said jerry suddenly, “i shall go and get some in the *.” then she ran off through the forest to the * with her basket. along the way, she was quite tired, so she rested upon some *g rocks. it gradually became late and jerry decided to go and buy the bread, but suddenly a wolf cried out behind her; “please, please * me!” cried the wolf, “i have a problem that nobody wants to *!” then he held out his paw to jerry, there was a thorn stuck to his paw. “is this a trick?” asked jerry, “because wolves like to eat people.”
“oh no,” answered the wolf, “we do not eat people now, we only want to eat some bread with mustard on top;” then he cried again. jerry quickly knelt down and removed the thorn from the wolf’s paw; “oh thank you! thank you!” shouted the wolf joyfully, “i shall n*r forget your kindness!” then the wolf returned to his home. jerry walked to the * to buy healthy fresh bread, and then she ran back home with a full basket of it.
on the way, she was still tired; so she stayed at the same place. as she was about to go, some greedy wolves blocked her way. they had water in their mouths and said, “give us the bread!” said a wolf, “where are the mustard?” asked a second wolf, “just give it to us!” shouted the third wolf. jerry had no choice, as she was about to give the fresh bread away to the wolf, the wolf that she had saved before rushed out and said, “leave her alone!” he growled, “that girl saved me before, and so leave her alone!” he shouted again.
the other wolves had no choice but to obey, they walked away. jerry thanked her new friend the wolf, and the wolf said that he was supposed to do that in return. in order to show jerry’s respect for him, she gave him half the bread, and returned home immediately to tell her mother about it.
they had some bread that *ning, and jerry’s mother including jerry herself both became good friends with the wolf. the wolf also had plenty of bread, and moved his home close to jerry.
the moral of this story was: if you * others and they will * you in return, you * them again then friends you’ll become. it will be a peaceful life if friendship is all around us.
四年级:欧阳雨鹭
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