this is the kitchen of my family. it’s *g and nice. look! my mother is cooking in it. this is a microwave and that is a stove. there is a *g table here. there are many things on it. what are these? they look yummy! oh, they’re strawberries. and what are those? they are grapes.
【要领点评】
这篇作文的题目是“在厨房”里，作者根据自己家的厨房情况。介绍厨房里有微波炉和电炉，有一张大桌子和桌子上的物品等，以及*在做饭，非常真实。
小朋友们，可以从观察自己身边的事、物写起，利用所学的句子，描述身边熟悉的东西来训练习作。
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