the very important person i can n*r fail to remember is my chinese teacher, ms. lu. she has a lot of advantages such as honest, humorous, *ful and so on, but it isn’t key point.
when i was in grade one, my exam results were not very good so all teachers didn’t liked me very much, but ms. lu didn’t give up me. she encouraged me to study,at the same time she *ed me .
when i was in grade three ,l was good at all subjects and my exam results were very good. ms. lu said that i set up a good example for students.
of all the teachers i know perhaps no one deserves my respect * than ms. lu .
作者:徐颐珽
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the very important person i can n*r fail to remember is my chinese teacher, ms. lu. she has a lot of virtues such as honesty, humor, *fulness and so on, but it isn’t the key point.
when i was in grade one, my exam results were not very good, so all teachers didn’t like me very much, but ms. lu didn’t give me up. she encouraged me to study and *ed me a lot.
when i was in grade three, l was good at all subjects and my exam results were very good. ms. lu said that i set up a good example for the other students.
of all the teachers i know perhaps no one deserves my respect * than ms. lu .
初一:徐颐珽
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