i used to have many dreams. as i grow up, i still have so many dreams. *ry dream makes me change.
when i was six years old, i dreamed to be a student. this dream made me change a lot. i studied hard and i did * homework to be a student.
but when i became a student, i wanted to be a writer because i love writing so much. being a writer means * and * people will read my passages and i can share my ideas with *ryone. well, it also makes you keep calm and * me become wiser.
now, i am dreaming to be a kid because i want to stay with my parents * often. maybe this dream is very strange. but when i grow up, i find i have lost lots of amazing feelings ofbeing a kid. i am dreaming to be a kid. it means i can play with parents and spend * with them. this dream makes me change. i think i must study hard to make my parents not work so hard. they have done a lot for me and my sister. i hope to become a kid again and stay with my parents * time. the dream makes me know the hardships of my parents. and i have changed because of this dream.
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i used to have many dreams. as i grow up, my dreams change a lot.
before i went to school, i dreamed of becoming a student. but when i became a student, i wanted to be a writer because i love writing so much. being a writer means * and * people will read my passages and i can share my ideas with *ryone. well, it can also * me become wiser.
now, i am dreaming of becoming a kid. maybe this dream is very strange. but as i grow up, i find i have lost lots of amazing feelings of being a kid. if i were a little kid again, i could play with parents and spend * with them.
this dream makes me change, too. i think i must study hard to make my parents not to work so hard. they have done too much for me and my sister.
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初二:蒋婉迪
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