Changes changes in me

2023-07-29 09:13:00 666阅读 投稿:网友
前言in the past ten years , great changes have taken place in my hometown there were green hills, fresh air




in the past ten years , great changes have taken place in my hometown. there were green hills, fresh air and many old houses. while in recent years, with the d*lopment of society, my hometown has been greatly changed. now the roads are getting much wider. what's *, you can see many modern and beautiful buildings *rywhere, and the living conditions are improving. people are enjoying a comfortable life now. i feel very excited about the changes in my hometown and i thank my hometown will become better and better in the future.

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in the past ten years, great changes have taken place in my hometown.

in the past, there were green hills, fresh air and many old houses while in recent years, with the d*lopment of economy, my hometown has been greatly changed. now the roads are getting much wider. what's *, you can see many modern and beautiful buildings *rywhere. the living conditions are improving. people are enjoying a comfortable life now.

i feel very excited about the changes in my hometown and i think my hometown will become better and better in the future.

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