2017年高考全国2卷英语作文范文及赏析二
dear henry,
i have known that a chinese *-cutting exhi*tion whose subject is about chinese festivals will be held in our city.
knowing that you have a great interest in chinese traditional culture, i am writing the e-mail to invite you to visit the exhi*tion together with me. the exhi*tion will be held in the museum from 9a.m. to 7pm. on june 15th, which will last for only one day. on that day, the works of *-cutting artists from all over china will be exhi*ted in the museum. just as i have told you, it is about chinese traditional festivals. therefore, in the exhi*tion, not only can the skills of these *-cutting artists be enjoyed, but also you can know * about the customs of our chinese traditional festivals from these beautiful works.
time permitting, please contact me. i am looking forward to visiting the exhi*tion together with you.
yours,
li hua
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2. 没有明显语法错误;
3. 硬伤：主题句不够突出；
4. 句式套用比较生硬：例如：not only but also； time permitting…
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