_一：开头
_句子的开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，*后再加一个状语。可以把状语置于句首，或用分词做状语等。
_〔原文〕we met at the school gate and went there together early in the morning.
_〔修正〕early in the morning we met at the school gate and went there together.
_〔原文〕the young man couldn’t * crying when he heard the bad news.
_〔修正〕hearing the bad news， the young man couldn’t * crying.
_二、结尾
_1、 all in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如说到和谐* all in all, what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonious society.)
_2、 therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
_3、 as a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我们必须采取一些有效的措施来做些什么)
_4、 from what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
_5、 obviously(此为过渡短语), we can draw the conclusion that good manners arise from politeness and respect for others.
_一些用法：
_1、 陈述个人的观点
_it is alleged that(据说)
_in my view, both sides are partly right(两方面都部分的正确)
_as far as i am concerned(就我而言)
_as regards to me
_my own point of view is that……
_personally, i beli* that……
_my experience tells me that……
_the invention of the handset, i dare to say, turns out to be a tremendous hit.
_the application of web sites, i dare to say, turns out to be a greatly hit.
_it comes as no surprise that chinese economy becomes increasingly hot.
_2、 陈述别人的观点
_other inspaniduals, how*r, take the attitude that……
_(错误的观点)* is under the false belief that……
_3、 图表
作文
_the table shows\indicates\ r*als that ……(表明、暗示、揭示)
_according to the statistics showing in that graph, we can easliy see\found……(根据表中的数据，我们可以看见，发现)
_as seen from the chart/ as is portrayed in the picture
_sales went into a slight decline=sales declined slightly(小幅下降)
_sales declined dramatically/sharply/greatly/hugely (大幅下降)
_a brief glimpse at our campus (the picture/cartoon/caricature) vividly shows that mo*le phone, becoming * and * prevalent.
_好的替代
_the machine\the device 代替 com*r
_handset代替 cell phone
_*the middle kingdom代替 china
_intensely\crucially important代替 very important (it is crucially important that the benefits of collective be on our priority.)
_approaches代替 ways
_current(currently) 代替 now
_growing inspaniduals代替 * and * people
_inspaniduals/ characters/ folks 代替 people, persons
_positive, favorable, rosy(美好的), promising(有希望的), perfect, pleasurable, excellent, outstanding, 代替 good
_unfavorable, poor, adverse, ill 代替 bad
_an army of, an ocean of, a multitude of 代替 many, a lot of
_take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that 代替 think
_affair, business, matter 代替 thing
_for my part, from my own perspective 代替 in my opinion
_beneficial, rewarding 代替 *ful
_exceedingly, extremely, intensely 代替 very
_pour attention into代替 pay attention to
_bear in mind that代替remember
_enjoy, possess代替 have
_to name only a few/ as an example代替for example/ instance
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