_一：用介词短语替代从句，例：
_原句：while they were playing tennis, she started an argument that lasted all morning.
_修改后：during tennis she started an argument that lasted all morning.
_原句：when you come to the second traffic light, turn right.
_修改后：at the second traffic light turn left.
_二：删除诸如"who is”或"that is"之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：
_句：the novel, which is written in three parts, told a story that took place in the middle ages.
_修改后：the three-part novel told a story set in the middle ages.
_注：把句中的"three parts"改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词"which is written in"。我们经常可以将关系代词如"that"去掉，这只会引起*少的变动。
_三：剔除你不需要的单词，例：
_two joint partners will present their views over a long-distance telephone call.
_写完这样的句子后，你自己再读一遍，挑出单词"joint"和"telephone"，注意删去不必要的词。
_英语写作注意两点
_一、先审题，弄清写作要求审题是写好
作文
的前提，也是书面表达的基础。如果写偏了题，语言表达再好也很难得高分。审题时要注意两个方面：_1.认真地看两遍题目，包括提示，*了解写作要求。
_2.理清思路，确定体裁、框架结构和内容。
_二、用英语进行思维英语写作时必须排除汉语思维的干扰。
_从现在起应逐渐加大阅读量和听的输入量，将阅读、听力训练与书面表达有机地结合起来。经常
体会
和领悟作者传递*和表达思想的方式。在话题讨论和写作中经常运用所学到的表达方式就会有所创造。还要尽量做到“五多”：多看、多听、多思考、多用心体验和感悟身边的人和事、多用英语说和写自己的体验和感受。___