2015年中考英语作文写作指导

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前言阅读电视广告词:“if we don’t save water,the last * of water will be a tear-* ”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。




_阅读电视广告词:“if we don’t save water,the last * of water will be a tear-*.”根据提示,写一篇60-80词的短文。

_提示:

_1.生活离不开水。

_2.可饮用水在减少。

_3.水污染严重。

_4.应保护水源,再利用水。

_思路点拨与参考答案

_a. [思路点拨]:

_①文体:记叙文。

_②时态:一般过去时态,一般现在时态。采用正反对*写作手法,增加感染力。

_③写作目的:告诉读者保护环境的重要性。

_jinyun mountain is a famous place of interest.*ry day a lot of tourists come here to enjoy its beauty. but a few years ago,some of them paid no attention to protecting the environment.they threw their rub*sh,such as plastic bags,fruit skins and waste * on the ground.sometimes they broke trees,picked flowers and killed *rds. some *n made fires in the woods to cook food.how *erous it was.luckily,great changes have taken place here.tourists are used to putting their rub*sh into dust*ns,and they are doing their best to protect the *rds and plants as well.they bring their own meals instead of cooking to pr*nt starting a forest fire in the mountains.all these changes make us very happy.

_b. [思路点拨]:

_①夹叙夹议(说明现状,谈谈感想)。

_②时态:一般现在时态。

_③广告词的含义——水很重要,应保护和再利用(写作意图)。

_water is very important to humans.we can’t live without water.the water we can drink is falling.but some people don’t seem to care about it.they waste a lot of water.they pour dirty water into rivers and lakes.water pollution is getting * and * serious.so we must do something to stop the pollution.we not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse it.if we don’t do this,the last * of water will be a tear-*.

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