i have many reports that i need to tell you guys, and it is about love. i know that some of you hate this word and think that it was some of my mean tricks again, but i just want to tell you that this was no joke, because i had put my heart on this report.
it was the summer, and i was just doing my homework as usual holidays; i was actually having a very good time and what was being told of me, and i went down stairs to get a snack. when i saw this cool girl named marinette, she was cool; and i just wanted to talk to her. i didn’t actually have a crush on her; i just really liked the way that she looks. i just went outside and stopped to say, “hi,” she said hi back, and i was actually astonished to see her quite surprised; she looked like she had a very good surprise that she was having at. i looked all the way through this and saw no such thing; i shook my head, and went inside.
after i had finished lunch i went down stairs t get my bag and get ready for school. when i got into my seat, i started to think that something strange is up with marinette; it was actually not quite astonishing to hear this; but it was actually what i was hoping for, i started to jump up, and rushing to the bathroom. i scolded some people on the way, and plad came out of my pocket, you know the flying cat: what’s your problem; maybe you have a crush on her; “no, of course not.”
i blushed, and was waiting to tran*orm to figure what was up. i figured that some people didn’t want somebody rummaging around somebody, and so i tran*ormed back, and went to class.
i sat on my seat quietly until the school bell rang like the signal that it was time to go home. i started to have a low voice, and i actually *n began to learn swimming. it was very strange that somebody could learn that, but many people do have that kind of ha*t.
i started rummaging around my room, and found some cool diaries from so long ago; i checked on them and went to bed, and thought all about love for the next few hours until i fell asleep. it was kind of cool, but i prefer it that way since i didn’t *n know that it was time to be reflected by your personal self.
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i have many reports that i need to tell you guys, andto get my bag and get ready for school. when i got into my seat, i started to think that something strange is up with marinette; it was actually not quite astonishing to hear this; but it was actually what i was hoping for, i started to jump up, and rushing to the bathroom. i scolded some people on the way, and
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