the final day
it was the final day that i got to spend time with my friends; because tomorrow i would have to move where my aunt lived. my friends were very sad, and i myself was also too. we huddled there for a long time, until our parents called us home. the next day we woke up early and packed *rything up; then we took the train and started out for my aunt’s home. that day was so very hot, and we had to climb a mountain before we arrive. actually, i got to say that that was quite amazing.
not to mention hat during the clim*ng, i heard something that had shocked me very much. which also meant that i didn’t get to care as much as i was supposed to; and it also gave me a very good idea that depends on my braveness, actually not that idea sort of.
here is how the story went on: when we arrived at the station, i got off and said that i had missed my friends very, very much; but my mother said that i could see them in the future.
i was very angry about hose words, and ran off as quickly as i could; but my dad caught me since that he was in the first. i was very angry about that; my dad said that we were going to climb a mountain.
when we arrived, dad showed me the map, and that we were going to have a clim*ng race. my dad won of course, and i was the last. i was very sad; but my mom said that was matter. then i said, “because first i got to lose my friends; then i became angry because you said that i could see them in the future; then *rything went wrong.” “like what?” asked my mom and dad together, “like losing the clim*ng *;” “so, it was just for fun like playing video *s in the house. or trying to blow up your body in the lab, and besides tomorrow you can see your friends again; we are only staying here for one whole night,” at these words i was very astonished; *n surprised of my wits.
that was when the next morning, i went back, and could play with my friends once *. it was a very funny story since it was a real one, and i thought that we were going move there. my friends questioned me about it, and yes i only had one answer, i was playing with you and didn’t listen carefully.
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it was the final day that i got to spend time with my friends; because tomorrow i would have to move to the place where my aunt lived. my friends were very sad, and i myself was also sad. we hugged there for a long time, until our parents called us home. the next day we woke up early and packed *rything up; then we took the train and started out for my aunt’s home. that day was so very hot, and we had to climb a mountain before we arrive. actually, i got to say that was quite amazing.
not to mentionit didn’t matter. then i said, “because first i got to lose my friends; then i became angry because you said that i could see them in the future; then *rything went wrong.” “like what?” asked my mom and dad together, “like losing the clim*ng *;” “so, it was just for fun like playing video *s in the house. or trying to blow up your body in the lab, and besides tomorrow you can see your friends again; we are only staying here for one whole night,” at these words i was very astonished; *n surprised of my wits.
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