spring is coming.i love spring very much. i think. there is a garden behind my house.the tall, *g tree，in front of my house.in spring,i go to the hu ying park *ry day.the many flowers in the grassland,this is really beautiful.so, i like the park. today is sunday, i eat dinner after,i go to a *g, *g mountain.the mountain name is hang qi.occasionally i go for a walk on the mountain.this mountain has a forest.inside the forest is very dense.i love this mountain. spring is so beautiful, i love spring！
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spring is coming. i love spring very much. there is a garden behind my house. and there is a tall tree in front of my house, too. in spring, i often go to the huying park. there are many beautiful flowers, so i like the park. on sundays, i often go clim*ng a mountain called hangqi after dinner. occasionally i go for a walk there. the mountain has a forest. i love the mountain because i can see many trees and flowers and i can also breathe the fresh air. spring is so beautiful, i love spring!
修改老师：crystal 老师
五年级:罗浩璘
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