like spring. i want to embrace the spring. touch the flowers, lying on the grass, smelling the fragrance of flowers, feel the thick tree, feel the embrace of spring, i want to embrace the spring. rain, i want to feel the spring rain, feel the spring, spring, ah, let me into your warm embrace it! i like spring!
修改后：
i like spring. i want to embrace the spring. i want to touch the flowers, lie on the grass, smell the fragrance of flowers, and feel the thick trees. i want to feel the spring rain, too. let me run into the warm embrace of spring! i like spring!
修改老师：crystal 老师
六年级:潘子瑶
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