i will n*r forget that moment when i was pressing the buttons on the phone .i was entering a hot line to find out my results in the final examination of junior school. i remember having a hopeful but anxious feeling in my stomach. kill or cure? the *g moment had come. on hearing the voice say "congratulations! you come top in the exam." i cheered up.”you make it!" i just smiled a *g smile to myself. the success really encouraged me a lot. there is no doubt that for the youth the internet is an important tool for study. nothing can be compared with its convenient operation, high speed and varied *rmation resources. as long as you click what you need, you’ll get a large number of *rmation picked out in such a short time. besides outputting the *rmation, at the same time, yon can input your own works and send them to the internet. in this way you can have * opportunities to share the tremendous spiritual exc*ent with the ones who have common goals. by comparison, the youth prefer to spend the long and friendless *nings in front of the com*r—it seers to be the only form of entertainment. they have a variety of experiences: from the chat to the love online,from the network * to the network crime. perhaps they have led the cultural trend of the network, and they are the spreader of the internet culture. the old, how*r, sometimes imagine .the internet to be a sort of place full of mystery. they often failed to understand how the ‘net’ works. one thing is certain, how*r, they always go into raptures at the mere mention the internet. they are for*r talking with a proud about how skilled their grandsons operate the com*r and surf the internet, or the fantastic the internet trip they went on their own ----after that, they n*r forget to list the privilege of modern science one by one, and make a conclusion that how fast the science and technology d*loped. no one can avoid being influence.
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i will n*r forget that moment when i was pressing the buttons on the phone .i was entering a hot line to find out my results in the final examination of junior school. i remember having a hopeful but anxious feeling in my stomach. kill or cure? the *g moment had come. on hearing the voice say "congratulations! you come top in the exam." i cheered up.”you you can input your own works and send them to the internet. in this way you can have * opportunities to share the tremendous spiritual exc*ent with the ones who have common goals. by comparison, the youth prefer to spend the long and friendless *nings in front of the com*r—it
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