in the spring,we can flying kite.spring a very beautiful.i beli* *ryone love spring. in the spring ,i h* a picnic in the park .we look some ducks in the pond,they are lovely,sky not have a clouds. so today out of the question rain soon. i heard the weather forecast ‘’it will be sunny in shandong''.we are in the park the sun is shining and the wind is blowing ,linda and i are playing hinde and seek.the *rds are singing.the rab*ts are jimping.the weather is very good.a man is wearing a *g hat.some clildren are jumping in the water. we are having a lovely time！bye-bye.
修改后：
sring is very beautiful. i beli* *ryone loves spring. in spring, we can fly kites. in spring, we can have a picnic in the park. there, we can see some lovely ducks playing in the pond. the sun is shining brightly, the wind is blowing gently and the *rds are singing happily. linda and i are playing hide and seek. the weather is very good. we are having a great time.
修改老师：crystal老师
六年级:管晓宇
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