walking in the street, singing, breathing and smiling. yes, it's march, spring is coming. miss spring is very shy, she has the quietest foot-steps in the world. therefore, *rything is growing in silence during spring, as a consquence, we aren't aware that spring has come until certain signs appear. a year's plan starts in spring. spring is temporary but full of vigor and vitality. so, i think something meaningful should be done for the special season. hug in spring, hug in health. as we know, a healthy body is worth * than gold. affecte by the fog, people hardly go out in winter, in fact, it's bad for our body. now, in the early spring, just go out with family, sitting on the grass, seeing the scattered flowers spread from near to far, listening to the *rds singing in the tree and breathing the fresh air around you, at the same time, having a picnic, i'm sure *ryone of your family will be in a good mood! of course, you can also have an outing in spring with your friends. hug in spring, hug in success. now it is the beginning of the new year, a specific plan should be made carefully and completed in time. working under the direction of the arrangements, we will keep energetic all year round, and we will achi* our goals and make much progress in the end! hug in spring, hug in dream. as students of senior 3, it won't be long before we graduate and take the national matriculation examinations. it's certain that all of us are eager to enter excellent colleges, so we are supposed to make *ry effort to study hard and improve our grades rapidly. just sow in spring, and the efforts will become the reality in autumn, we will reap what we sowed! remember, little steps add up to a *g dream! hug in spring, hug in what you want! the spring is exact, the sunshine is warm!
修改后：
walking in the street, i can hear *rds singing and see flowers smiling. spring has come quietly. *rything begins to come back to life and starts to grow. a year's plan starts in spring. spring is short but full of vigor and vitality. so, i think something meaningful should be done. hug in spring and be health. as we know, a healthy body is worth * than gold. because of the haze, people hardly go out in winter, which is bad for our body. now, it's time for going out with family, to sit on the grass, see colorful flowers, listen to *rds singing and breathe fresh air. at the same time, we can have a picnic with our family and have a great time. of course, you can also have an outing with your friends. hug in spring and be succes*ul. now it is the beginning of the new year, a specific plan should be made carefully and completed in time. working under the direction of the arrangements, we will keep energetic all year round, and we will achi* our goals and make much progress in the end! hug in spring and be practical. as high school seniors, we will soon take the national college entrance examination and graduate from high school. it's certain that all of us are eager to enter excellent colleges, so we are supposed to make *ry effort to study hard and improve ourselves rapidly. we sow in spring, keeping on working hard. then we can reap what we sowed! remember, little steps add up to a *g dream! hug in spring, and hug in what you want!
修改老师：crystal 老师
高三:李和淼
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