the beautiful spring, i love you. what? are you beautiful, so lovely. you are a problem for revival is. awaken your coming, the flowers and grass, trees and get out of bed. i love you spring, i love you in the spring. how i want to hug you ah.
修改后：
the beautiful spring, i love you. you are lovely. you are a season for revival. spring is colorful. the flowers bloom. grass and trees turn green. i love spring. it is warm outside, and i can go and play.
修改老师：crystal老师
三年级:书王智慧
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