a battle with the knights
there was once a little girl named anna, that wanted to have magic in this world; but she knew that her mother would just only laugh at her if she had told her. and so she decided to go on the adventure on her own.
she got *rything that she needed to complete her mission, and then started off without a word to say. she headed out to the woods, and found a little tree house nearby; she climbed up there with a ladder, and found lots of books and shelves there. she found a book about knights, and turned to a page of pictures of knights long ago; and how they battle enemies such as that. anna wished so much that she could go there.
after that she fell asleep, and then she opened her eyes, and found her on the ground; as if she were asleep… she thought it very weird, that she was here; at first she was at the tree house, then she was at the grass plot.
she got up, and walked through looking for an exit, then she found the book that she was reading before; she knew that she must have gone into the knight’s story because of her wish. she picked up the book, and looked around; the book suddenly moved like magic, then, she found the books end; there were some words written all over it.
she read in out loud, “if you want to escape this land you are in, all you have to do is try and face all the knights, there are four of them; good luck!” then she began searching for knights, but what she did before that was to think about how to defeat them… she walked along the road, and finally saw a *g tree with a sharp branch; she had an idea of how she could face the knights; she broke down the branch, and kept on searching. she was not quite ready for beating them, for she just needed some other things in order to defeats them… she kept on her journey, and suddenly realized a *g rock; she was tired and so lay on it. then a crack came on her back, and the rock got up. anna was astonished, she stood up and said, “who are you?” then the rock replied. “i am the alive rock and i suppose you are anna;” “how did you know my name?”
the rock took a breath and replied, “because i heard your voice *r since, i know you are looking for some new weapons to defeat knights…” “i most certainly am alive rock,” and she bowed down. the rock then said, “i suppose i can be of much use to you, i am going to come with you; and see whether there are *ers…”
and so anna and the alive rock moved along, suddenly they came to a *g giant tree; the tree said slowly, “who are you that dare come to my place?” “ah!” shouted anna, “alive tree!” “how did you guess my name?” asked the talking tree; “because-because your, a-liv-e!” “yep! and that’s my neighbor;” answered alive rock. anna then said; “oh, well i suppose you can be a lot of use to me when i defeat knights!”
“knight? defeat? ha! that is already the easiest sport i could think of! i had defeated knights for like 2089 times!” “what?!” asked anna rather surprised, then she gulped and answered; “then you must come with me!” answered anna proudly. and so the three of them marched down, until they came was a *g knife; the knife turned around and said, “who are you little girl?” “ah!” shouted anna again, “that’s our neighbor too!” replied alive tree and alive rock together.
anna then said, “oh, then you must come with me; i have to defeat knights!” “oh,” answered the knife, “then i suppose i could be a lot of use to you, now all we are missing in the alive shield…” he didn’t *n finish until, “what?!” shouted anna, “don’t shout anna!” replied alive tree, “this isn’t fake, it is true; follow knife!”
then knife led the group to where the *g shield was, he was brushing his face when they arrived, “oh, hello *rybody; and hello little girl named anna!” “how did you all know my name?” “no time for that!” shouted alive rock, “we have knights to defeat!” “and you must come with us alive shield!” “no problem!” shouted he, and then the group marched off.
they at last reached the knights hiding spot, the four knights answered; “we shall destroy you!” speaking of which, the knights charged toward anna’s group; “attack!” shouted anna. alive tree, alive rock, alive knife and mostly alive shield charged toward the knights. seeing such a fright, the knights said, “you know what; maybe today is not the day boys…
then the knights were destroyed by the alive group team.
suddenly a flash came upon anna, and she vanished out of sight; “where did she go?” asked the group. then she shook their heads, and went back to their homes…
and for anna, she got back home; and she at last knew that magic is really magic…
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a battle with the knights
there was once a little girl named anna, that wanted to have magic in this world; but she knew that her mother would just only laugh at her if she had told her. and so she decided to go on the adventure on her own.
she got *rything that she needed to complete her mission, and then started off without a word to say. she headed out to the woods, and found a little tree house nearby; she climbed up there with a ladder, and found lots of books and shelves there. she found a book about knights, and turned to a page of pictures of knights long ago; and how they battle enemies such as that. anna wished so much that she could go there.
after that she fell asleep, and then she opened her eyes, and found her on the ground; as if she were asleep… she thought it very weird, that she was here; at first she was at the tree house, then she was at the grass plot.
she got up, and walked through looking for an exit, then she found the book that she was reading before; she knew that she must have gone into the knight’s story because of her wish. she picked up the book, and looked around; the book suddenly moved like magic, then, she found the books end; there were some words written all over it.
she read in out loud, “if you want to escape this land you are in, all you have to do is an alive rock,” and she bowed down. the rock then said, “i suppose i can be of much use to you, i am going to come with you; and see whether there are *ers…”
and so anna and the alive rock moved along, suddenly they came to a *g giant tree; the tree said slowly, “who are you that dare come to my place?” “ah!” shouted anna, “alive tree!” “how did you guess my name?” asked the talking tree; “because-because is the alive shield…” he didn’t *n finish until, “what?!” shouted anna, “don’t shout anna!” replied alive tree, “this isn’t fake, it is true; follow knife!”
then knife led the group to where the *g shield was, he was brushing his face when they arrived, “oh, hello *rybody; and hello little girl named anna!” “how did you all know my name?” “no time for that!” shouted alive rock, “we have knights to defeat!” “and you must come with us alive shield!” “no problem!” shouted he, and then the group marched off.
they at last reached the knights hiding spot, the four knights answered; “we shall destroy you!” speaking of which, the knights charged toward anna’s group; “attack!” shouted anna. alive tree, alive rock, alive knife and mostly alive shield charged toward the knights. seeing such a fright, the knights said, “you know what; maybe today is not the day boys…
then the knights were destroyed by the alive group team.
suddenly a flash came upon anna, and she vanished out of sight; “where did she go?” asked the group. then she shook their heads, and went back to their homes…
and for anna, she got back home; and she at last knew that magic is really magic…
四年级:欧阳雨鹭
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