spring is coming! beautiful spring has come at last! we walk on the grass, embrace the beautiful spring. look! the flowers smile, the grass nodded, the little swallow flew back, the warm spring breeze blowing over the cheek, the *rds are happy to sing, we are so happy! oh！ spring is so full of life!
修改后：
spring is coming! we walk on the grass to welcome and embrace the beautiful spring. look! the flowers are smiling, the grass is nodding, the little swallows are twittering, the warm spring breeze is blowing over the cheek, and the *rds are singing happily. we are so happy! spring is full of life!
修改老师：crystal老师
四年级:沈高涵
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