when spring comes,*rything is green .how beautrful the spring !the breath of spring ,embrace spring! in spring. the grass spit the bud , added a tracce of green for spring.they are full of vitality,grow in the arms of the spring.thousands of the *rds chattering together with many flowers,flowers doo --yan. the chlidren playing in the beautiful scenery, play . embraced in the spring.the river,rows of willow yiyi affectionate,blowing in the wind,gently swinging songs, waterfowl gently jimp on it ,the water shim mering corrugated lines. let's embrace the incomprably beautifui spring!
修改后：
when spring comes, *rything turns green. how beautiful the spring is! in spring, trees begin to spit the bud, adding some green to spring. they are full of vitality, growing in the arms of the spring. thousands of *rds are chattering together. the wind is blowing gently. the chlidren are playing in the beautiful scenery. let's embrace the beautifui spring!
修改老师：crystal老师
四年级:李名扬
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