dear miss. tam,
may day is coming. i ‘m going to beijing. i ‘m going by plane. because beijing is far. i ‘m going to visit a museum, see the great wall and take some photos. i ‘m going to eat lots of food, too. i think i will have a great time.
write soon,
best regards,
linn
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dear miss tam,
may day is coming. i'm going to beijing. i'm going there by plane, because it is too far. i'm going to visit a museum, see the great wall and take some photos. i'm going to eat lots of delicious food, too. i think i will have a great time.
best regards,
linn
五年级:陈家平
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