i like spring best.because there are beautiful flowers *rywhere.my composition title is hug in spring.spring is coming.earth recovery.the *rds are flying back again.the earth has returned to its former life.i imagine i can embrace the spring.spring is so lovely,so beautiful.
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i like spring best. because there are beautiful flowers *rywhere. spring is coming. *rything begins to come to life. the *rds are flying back again. the trees and grass start to turn green. i hope i can embrace the spring. spring is so lovely, so beautiful.
修改老师：crystal 老师
五年级:袁泉
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