hey, how are we! my name is peng yu. i am an open and bright boy, so my hobby is very wide.
i like sports.。 i can play basketball, badminton, table tennis, and play football. besides, i still have a *ke ride. this is a sport!
i like to eat, i like to eat chicken, eggs, content, fish and milk. my mother is a super star chef, my father is very handsome. for the two of them, i like my mother, because my mother will give me a lot of delicious.
besides, i also like singing, dancing and reading.
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my name is peng yu. i am an open and bright boy, so my hob*es are very wide.
i like sports. i can play basketball, badminton, table tennis, and football. besides, i still like *ke riding! i often do sports with my friends when i am free.
i like eating. i like chicken, eggs, fish and milk. because my mother is a super star chef, she always cooks me a lot of delicious food.
i also like singing, dancing and reading.
修改老师：andy老师
六年级:彭御嘉
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