i wish i had a pair of wings，take me all over the world to see the beautiful spring，because spring is holy ，i love spring 。 the sun is shining on my body，i looked at the fragrant flowers and green grass. spring girl's footsteps have come to the earth ，small trees have leaves, i touch the skin of a tree。i listen to the footsteps of the spring rain ，i planted the seeds of hope.，spring has come。 i took the hand of spring girl, i hope my chunkun winter just disappear, i hope my achi*ments, such as spring like, getting better and better, i hope my knowledge, such as the new grass, which grows higher, * and * rich.i really hope that the spring will n*r stop, and i embrace life。 now i don't say it. i want to feel the spring.
修改后：
in spring, farmers start to sow the seeds. and i am also ready to have a new start. i am ready to work hard. i am ready to learn. i hope my knowledge, like the new grass, will be richer and richer.
修改老师：crystal老师
六年级:管晓宇
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