i had a busy weekend . i did lots of things .on saturday morning , i watered the plants . then , i sent some emails to my friends . in the afternoon , i didmy homework . then , i played the piano . in the *ning , i cleaned my room by myself . then , my family and i visited family and friends . on sunday morning , i fished with my best friend , anna . then ,i painted the picture . in the afternoon , i read an interesting book . then , my mother and i went to the beach .the sea was beautiful . in the *ning , i ate a *g dinner . the food was spicy and delicious . then , i saw a film at the cinema . the film was nice .i was busy but i was happy .
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i had a busy weekend. i did lots of things. on saturday morning, i watered the plants. then, i sent some emails to my friends. in the afternoon, i did my homework. then, i played the piano. in the *ning, i cleaned my room by myself. then, my family and i visited family and friends.
on sunday morning, i fishedwithmybest friend, anna. then, i painted the picture. in the afternoon , i read an interesting book. then, my mother and i went to the beach. the sea was beautiful. in the *ning, i ate a *g dinner. the food was spicy and delicious. then, i saw a film at the cinema. the film was nice . i was busy but i was happy .
六年级:李勤
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