jasper makeup into a tree falling 10000 green silk sash.spring.a word that contains life,at this time. bouquets of flowers and piles of brocades .give a person a kind of good feeling 。 spring is the starter for a year as dawn is for a day.yeah！spring morning breathe fresh air ,looking at the beautiful scenery outside the window .all let peopie become enlightened at once，refreshed . *ry spring .roadside wild flowers ,rose in the yard ，peony in the field ...all stood in full bloom . i like spring.like the eagle cannot do without the sky . i ardently love spring.like a child's love for his mother's arms.i often think of spring can come earlier .merely a little impossible. oho！spring.how beautiful you are.let me think of you all the time .let me look forward to you *ry moment . spring!a colorful season .
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spring is a word that contains life. spring is the start for a year as dawn is for a day. in spring morning, i can breathe the fresh air. and then i look at the beautiful scenery outside the window which refresh me at once. *ry spring, flowers along the roadside, roses in the yard, peony in the field and all the flowers are standing in full bloom. what a colorful season! i like spring, like a child's love for his mother's arms. how beautiful spring is. let me hug you in my arms.
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